Here's this one along with a more recent version I began but didn't finish. Plus a rough version that took things to a violent and contradictory direction...I didn't go with it but I still may in the finished version.
Opinions are welcome here: does she pound on him or not?
Opinions are welcome here: does she pound on him or not?
Well, that's what happens when you hex a catfighting champion...!
ReplyDeleteYeah the middle page isn't as good for me but I think that's just cause it's roughs
ReplyDeleteLoving this storys progression
Her orgasmic reaction on the first page is incredible
Yeah K. I have the same opinion about the orgasmic impact of the sex hex, as Richard has it. That said I do like the one on the third page too, it's just that the first one is more profound looking. A good lesson in story telling, wot?
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